Though the UC essay prompt 6 is one of the simpler questions of the PIQs, it can be rather tricky if you don’t know the pitfalls. Simple prompts do not equate to simple essays.

This also happens to be one of the more important PIQs because of its direct association with your major. Writing for prompt 6 means that admissions officers will have an inside look on just exactly how you will approach your major and why you do so.

The primary pitfall with the UC essay prompt 6 is taking advantage of the simplicity of the prompt and not getting into depth about your passion.

Because of this, we would heavily advise taking our advice below on the two questions: writing about what inspires you, and what you’ve done to further your interest.

Table of Contents

1. UC Essay Prompt 6
2. Introduction to How to Write PIQ 6.
3. Why Does the Subject Inspire You?
4. What Experience Furthered Your Interest in the Subject?
5. Sample Essay Structure.

UC Essay Prompt 6

“UC Essay Prompt 6.  Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom. 

Things to consider:  Many students have a passion for one specific academic subject area, something that they just can’t get enough of. If that applies to you, what have you done to further that interest? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had inside and outside the classroom — such as volunteer work, internships, employment, summer programs, participation in student organizations and/or clubs — and what you have gained from your involvement.

Has your interest in the subject influenced you in choosing a major and/or future career? Have you been able to pursue coursework at a higher level in this subject (honors, AP, IB, college or university work)? Are you inspired to pursue this subject further at UC, and how might you do that?” 

— UC Personal Insight Question 6

How to Write the UC Essay Prompt 6

If you already have a college major in mind, you may be thinking, “Thank Goodness! Finally, a straightforward essay prompt.” And it is; it’s simple, and there’s no traps waiting for you in this one. That’s good news for writers who don’t like the more nuanced and complicated Personal Insight Questions. 

So, let’s get to it!

Except, there’s the rule: The more easy a question is, the more difficult it becomes to stand out from the competition. This is because students who apply to universities will naturally gravitate toward simpler prompts to answer to maximize their admissions chances. 

Alright. So you can write your college essay on the UC Essay Prompt 6, but you’ll be competing with many more applicants who also chose to write this one thinking it would be easy. Now, that doesn’t mean you shouldn’t write this one. 

The UC Essay Prompt 6 is an opportunity for you to demonstrate the passion you have for a subject; this is a great opportunity to show the admissions officers that you have your future figured out and you’re not just a blind bat. And that’s good, colleges love applicants who already know what they want to be. 

It’s also your best chance, similar to UC essay prompt 4, to show off your drive as a student. Roughly speaking, if you’re already doing very well in one particular subject —even better if it’s in your major— then the UC essay prompt 6 should be a no-brainer. 

“Math is a mysterious maze of patterns with answers just waiting to be solved.”

“English is so connected with psychology and philosophy; it’s absolutely fascinating how much meaning I can draw from literature.”

“Biology”, “Engineering”, “Art”.

These are all great! 

Here’s the trick though: you need to be VERY CLEAR about exactly WHY you like and are inspired by the subject so much. Now, here we have a semantics problem on our hands. What exactly do they mean by inspired? 

Well, here’s what Merriam-Webster has to say on the matter.

Definition of inspire

transitive verb

1a: to influence, move, or guide by divine or supernatural inspiration

b: to exert an animating, enlivening, or exalting influence on was particularly inspired by the Romanticists”

Okay. So we know that it means to be guided by some sort of vision or to be moved. In that case, the subject you are inspired by isn’t just some subject that makes you feel good. There is, for lack of a better word, a sort of divine fate that pulls you into the thing that you do. 

So, for example, you might not be inspired by art if you only scroll through Instagram photos of peoples work; you may, however, be inspired by art if you find yourself making art often and enjoy the process because it gives you a sense of higher being. Cooking is enjoyable, sleep is comfortable, and video games are fun, but what exactly makes your subject more than just that? What about the experience makes it transcendental?

“But I’m just a teenager!” You may ask. “How on Earth would someone my age even have the life experience to have a divine experience?”

And to that we say that you’re right!

Now, that doesn’t mean you should give up. Why? Because NO ONE who is applying could reasonably have a subject they are completely bewitched by at their age. The college admissions officers know this. They know that applicants are generally too young to have a subject they can truly be inspired by. 

Although they know this, the UC admissions officers would still like to weed out applicants who are not passionate, and they can tell if the applicant isn’t through their writing. 

So, your objective as a future UC student is two-fold: One, be convincing enough to the admissions officers about how your subject inspires you; two, build on the descriptions of your inspiration with the “experience that furthered your interest inside/outside of the classroom.”

Why Does The Subject Inspire You?

This sort of goes without saying, but you’re not going to get accepted into the UC schools by starting your essay with boring, banal statements.

Here’s an example: 

“I am inspired by engineering. The field is fascinating. I’d love to design bridges in the future as a career. This is because I’m good at both physics and math in my AP classes…”

*Yawn*

Like any introduction, you must catch your reader’s attention quickly. If you had to rummage through a pile of admissions essays, you’re probably already bored out of your mind. After all, most essays are far too banal and superficial. Make sure the intro is riveting!

Here’s one of the fastest ways you can make a good intro:

Take your entire experience and try to locate where the climax would be if it were a fictional story. Then, take that climax and take it out of context; the objective of this is to keep admissions officers informed and out of the picture as much as possible. If it’s just somewhat out of context, they will be funneled into learning more about your experience with open arms. 

Here’s an example of this. 

• Good:  Few things match the satisfaction of nipping it in the bud; you finally find the faulty code, you press the delete button, and the entire line of code is clean and pristine. But then, my opinion changed completely. 

• Bad: I love coding a lot. It is very satisfying to solve the problem and make programs run efficiently again. 

You can find more about writing good intros in one of our writing guide articles. 

Another thing to keep in mind when writing about why you are inspired by your subject is to remember to use appropriate words. Yeah, sure, don’t curse in your admissions essay. But that was sort of obvious. We mean that you should know the right words that will maximize the potential of your admissions essay. 

Engineers and computer scientists tend to be more orderly and “stuff” oriented. To parallel your essay to that degree, make sure you use language that suggests orderliness and a desire to change the state of physical “things”. Here’s a few words that would work for that image. 

1. Pillar
2. Pristine
3. Justly
4. Swift
5. Sharp
6. Crisp
7. Bend
8. Will
9. Grasp

Now, what about creative people? What about English majors or future entrepreneurs with strong visions for the future? Well, just like before, you’d want to have the language that works for your respective subject’s personality. 

1. Actualize 
2. Architect
3. Adapt
4. Manifest
5. Rebuild
6. Funnel
7. Fabricate
8. Axioms
9. Fulfilled
10. Depict

What Experience Furthered Your Interest In The Subject?

Semantics! That’s the trick. What exactly do the admissions officers want and how to we avoid missing the mark?

The word to watch out for here in the UC Essay Prompt 6 is “furthered”

Furthered suggests that there was something you did to expand on your interest, so this has to be an action. This can be a project you undertook on your own, a club you joined and contributed to, etc. 

Regardless, this is one of the sections where it appears inevitable that you’ll be mentioning how you solved a sort of problem. If you work on a project or join a club or contribute anything productive in your subject, you are inadvertently solving some sort of problem. Perhaps your project was focusing on finding a solution to maintaining a bridge in a more cost-effective manner. Or maybe you banded with a group of friends to make a club that worked on publishing art. 

This also goes without saying, but you’ll earn extra brownie points if you show the admissions officers how furthering your interests built your character as well. It makes your UC essay look much more thorough and complete, but it’s understandable if you can’t add that without overreaching the word count. If you don’t know if your essay could use that extra boost, have an essay editor take a look at what you need to do. 

Remember, your experience doesn’t have to be something done in class; it can be outside the classroom. Just remember that it’s related to the major that you’re declaring. With this in mind, let’s move on to the overall structure outline. 

UC Essay Prompt 6 Sample Structure

1. Start with how your subject inspired you, but turn the tables and capture your admissions officer’s attention by giving the climax of the “story”. Remember to write the climax out of context just enough so that the admissions officers don’t get the entire story. (One short paragraph about 3-4 sentences long. )
2. Describe your experience and how it furthered your interest in your subject. What was the project you undertook and what obstacles did you face? How did these obstacles build your character and make you more fitting for the subject? Conclude the essay by showing them what your visions for the future are with your subject when you enter university. (1-2 paragraphs.)

Note: You should take a look at their guide on the UC Essay Prompt 6.

There’s a very important thing they mention about the subjects you get to choose.  

“It doesn’t have to be a class in which you’ve earned good grades – the important thing is you enjoyed the subject and it impacted you in some way.” Good luck! 

The thing is, you’re not required to write about a subject that you scored well in. It would, however, be impressive to show the admissions officers that both your GPA and college essay work together in synergy. If you have a subject that you love and it shows through your grades, they work together with one another. 

Here’s another thing they mentioned. 

“#6 continued) Maybe there’s a course you haven’t taken at school that you wish you did take or are looking forward to taking in college. How have you pursued your interest in that subject outside of school?”

There’s an advantage to pursuing a subject that wasn’t provided in your school. The good thing about this is that you can actually give admissions officers the impression that you stepping out of your comfort zone and are passionate enough to search for your interests. It demonstrates strength of character and perseverance for the subject you’re inspired by. 

So, don’t feel too bad if you have a subject that you’re very inspired by but can’t take it in class!

Have any other questions about the UC essay prompt 6? Worried that you won’t be able to write it well enough than the rest of the competition? That’s what we’re here for. We’ve helped many applicants get into their dream UC schools and even get accepted into a few reach schools by advising and consulting their essays. You should also know that advising and consulting takes time to execute and prepare for, so let us know as soon as possible.